Best Friends

Best Friends

A Poem by Manda
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We were best friends, but soon became lovers

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I miss you
Because I can't see you

I love you
Because I can't have you

You were my best friend
But now....

You're the love of my life


© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
This is just something I am going through right now. And its really hard to explain but it is really happening.

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Love this! This is how I feel at the moment. Anyway, really good!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aww! short but sweet. i'm sure some pll were in this situation before we they had a friend that they were in love with, but they didn't want to risk their friendship, but now after hearing that their friend feels the same way about them, they are bf and gf. Awww! This was a really sweet poem! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice short and emotional poem. It makes sense, and people can definitely relate to it. Good one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think I totally understand. It's like you didn't know how you felt until they were gone. Kinda like that??? I liked this. It was short and simple and straight to the point and sometimes those are the best ways to express your feelings. Good job. You did an amazing write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very Sweet, BFFS!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I thought this was a good poem. I did love it. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I absolutly love this. (:
It's such an easy thing to understand! nice job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aww, so cute! I loved the shortness and directness of this piece. I think that the situation that you described is one that a lot of people are going to be able to relate with, which is always a great thing as a writer. Good luck in your relationship. :D
~PaperHearts

Posted 9 Years Ago


A best friend who becomes a love has a better change of lasting if both friends feel the same, otherwise it can be quite the dilemma.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow I can relate to this piece cause I too have a dear friend in where I’ve developed feelings for, but I know I could never go that way. Great write well done

Posted 9 Years Ago



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