Best Friends

Best Friends

A Poem by Manda
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We were best friends, but soon became lovers

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I miss you
Because I can't see you

I love you
Because I can't have you

You were my best friend
But now....

You're the love of my life


© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
This is just something I am going through right now. And its really hard to explain but it is really happening.

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Well, expressed... to the point; covers much so, very succinctly! As if you "read my mind" and expressed past thoughts of my own.

Posted 9 Years Ago


when best friends turn into lovers its great, but don't lose the friendship, its best when your lover can be your best friend, companion, confidant, lover, and husband.... thats the best best gift ever... and i am proud to say gifted...

Posted 9 Years Ago


A well written poem, Congrats! Its great :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


beautifully written from the heart and soul. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aww short and sweet

Posted 9 Years Ago


You share with us the complexity of friendship and love that often mingles in... how the relationship changes.. deepens and moves. So well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I can relate to this a hundred percent.. unfortunately of course. . :P
a nice write. a lot said with such few words. keep it up Manda! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I can relate. Going through something similar at this moment.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i agree with all the other reviews on this poem.. well done .. short and to the point.

Chloe

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice simplicity. Once that line is crossed for one or both of the parties involved...the friendship dies.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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