No More

No More

A Poem by Manda
"

I dont need him anymore... I'm done

"
Just shut up!
I don't want to hear it!

You're not sorry,
And you don't care!

You already told me to leave,
And never come back!

I did what you said,
Instead of taking your head!

So just shut up!
And stop your whining!

I don't need this,
And I don't need you!

So shut up!
And leave me alone!

© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
I don't need this pain anymore. I don't need to be sad... Its been a while since I've wrote anything, but finally I managed to write something. Tell me what you think

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anger seeping out of every pore

Posted 11 Years Ago


simple and to the point. he hurted you so anything he says you don't hear it. I felt like that a few times and I can really relate to your feelings. when you are hurt by someone(especially) a love, it is hard to overcome the pain. but believe me in time you will find it in your heart to forgive him, and still carry on with your life.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Simple,
I love it.
Nice job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's nice. It shows your true feelings. So a guy told you to leave you alone and then followed you? Hypocrite.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very firm stand. You described your feelings well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Like a fist pounding the table.

Posted 12 Years Ago


F*CKING AMAZING. I love this poem. This is EXACTLY how I felt when s**t happened to me, the only way I could get it out was writing Hurt in my works. But this is the other side of the pain I couldn't quite express. Thank you for doing it! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great job. I can feel your anger feelings, like you were saying stop and I had enough.. Great poem, well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! This one would make a good neon sandwich board. You have a natural blunt flash feel.

When Pebbles breaks up w/BamBam, she has to hit hard. I don't mean that mockingly, I just find most realities cartoonish.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I don't understand when people say one thing, and then expect you just to come back... I was stupid enough to fall for it more than once...But not anymore. I can relate to this poem well. Very nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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