No More

I dont need him anymore... I'm done

Just shut up!
I don't want to hear it!

You're not sorry,
And you don't care!

You already told me to leave,
And never come back!

I did what you said,
Instead of taking your head!

So just shut up!
And stop your whining!

I don't need this,
And I don't need you!

So shut up!
And leave me alone!

Author's Note

I don't need this pain anymore. I don't need to be sad... Its been a while since I've wrote anything, but finally I managed to write something. Tell me what you think

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You captured flaming emotion. Great job.

[James Watts]

I think it was great. The annoyance and the rage, as well as the hurt came through loud and clear. Excellent write.

[Cassandra D.]

This was very interesting.
It was a very powerful poem

[Tina Kline]

Pain is harsh and so are your words but they needed to be said it sounded like. No one deserves to be hurt.

[SamBug]

Pain is so hard to handle sometimes and it's good to just tell someone to shut up and go away. It helps.

[Daydreamer54]

I really like it i could feel anger. and btw wining is spelled whining.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was anger filled. Really great write. I love the feeling of anger in this piece. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

Sounds to me like you need to release some frustrations
What better way than to put that rage on the page and it seem to me you’re doing a fine job at that keep it up and hang in there.

[Scarlet Pulse]

I like the repetition of "Just shut up" It has power in it. It is a good poem that expresses your feelings.

[clauds294]

I finally realized I didn't need the guy that broke my heart anymore any the only thing I ask myself is why I didn't realize that sooner. Writing is the best way to let go off all these feelings. Thanks for sharing with us cause you have great pieces of work!! Keep writing and don't let anything stop you. Instead turn everything in to an idea for your writing. :)
-Personal Experience.