Fail

Fail

A Poem by Manda
"

She is so mad because her mom...

"

She wants to scream

But she can't...

For her voice is silenced

By her mother's yelling

 

"I hate you!

You just don't understand!

You never do!"

She just dreaded to say

 

She sits there

With tears falling down her face

As her mother continues to shout

 

She asks herself...

Why did she fail her mother?

Why couldn't she be a better daughter?

Why couldn't she make her happy?

© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
I dont know this was something I was just kinda going through. Tell me what you think. I think the last few lines need some work.

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Poetry is an art where we can display are feelings and emotions, here I think you did a great job. Excellent write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is something I constantly have to go through. Thank you for writing this


Posted 13 Years Ago


manda this is really awesome i really like it

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on May 21, 2010
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