Misery

She is stressing over all the little things in life. All she wants to do is make people happy.

I'm struggling
Unable to decide
What's right or wrong

I'm hiding
Afraid of rejection
Their words scare me

I'm dwelling
On the past
Friends never do last

I'm obsessing
Over every mistake
Only longing for success

I'm realizing
Trust is unknown
 But lies are unforgettable

I'm wondering
How much longer
Until my misery ends

Will it ever end...?

Author's Note

Just something I'm going through.

Reviews

[A.Lee]

The questions never end until you make them. Sometimes it seems like everything has a bad side to it and it seems like the misery will just never end. But it will get easier and better with time. It never rains forever.

[Haifa]

I could say this poem is so powerful it was given a strength style. Well done

[Jess.]

This is so good! I can totally relate. It's like you wrote down every thing that I have been feeling over the past couple years!

[Mauricio Montoya]

I’ve been down this road of winding emotion, thoughts and feeling going in every direction. At least that’s what I get from this piece. Excellent write.

[SamBug]

Wow oh wow. This was every so powerful and good. Great write!!!

[Cassandra D.]

What a deep and strong poem. I hope you feel better soon.
Great work, though.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is an incredible snapshot of your life.
I dont know how you feel at this moment,
but your emotions were captured brilliantly.

[Senseless whatever]

good write. I like the way you used the bold font to highlight the points in this piece. Creative venting.

[PaperHearts]

This was a really heartbreaking poem. It sounds like you're going through a lot right now, and I hope that writing this all out was cathartic for you. I thought that this piece was written really well, and I liked the simplicity of the structure, matched with the complexity of the emotions. Everything will work out in the end, I promise. :)
~PaperHearts

[Luna Northstar]

Awwww this is so sad and touching. Very emotional. I can see you really put your heart and soul into this piece, with or without trying to. I'm so sorry you feel like this. I agree with daydreamer54. No one can help you but yourself... I really hope you feel better, and start holding your head up. You have amazing talent :)