Once Known But Now Forgotten

Best friends known to be lovers but forgotten in a new love for another.

I miss those days when we were best friends
Spending every waking minute together

I miss the way you made me laugh
Or even when I smiled

How can one summer
Change us forever

We were best friends
Known to be lovers

But as time quickened
We began to fall farther apart

We both knew
Time had made paths for two

You had found a new best friend
And I had too

A new love had taken the both of us
From the love we thought we would share together

We were best friends
Known to be lovers

But what was once known
Has now been forgotten

Reviews

[Wolfe Greytome]

A well written piece - I can't decide if I'm supposed to be sad or optimistic. This write feels as though it could go either way - either sadness at heartbreak, or the optimism of new love and moving on. Another great piece to add to your long list of amazing writes, Manda.

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

I had the EXACT situation last summer. You captured everything in this. I felt nostalgic. Good writers make their readers feel their words. And I'm going to go eat chocolate now. (:

[Mind Giant]

I think im with wolfe on this one. Not sure which way to go. But non the less I like the way it reads

[Mauricio Montoya]

very well writen,
Excellent write.

[Chris]

Closure...

Chris

[Daydreamer54]

Wow, this was so sad and heart felt. great write! ^^