My shining star

life could be anticipation or hope but most of the time it is acknowledgement of our being

My shining star

All these notions of joy seem so true

Each stretch of my thoughts reaches out for you

Your being is so peaceful and looks so serene

Contours of my being regained a new sheen

 

Waiting heart aches to hear known footsteps

Desire quiver and search for new depths

Waves of notions splash through the soul

To break all boundaries and lose control

 

Spread is the warmth that didn’t exist before

Just like a shipwreck suddenly finds the shore

New flash of life softened the tough sores of life

I was dead for ages and suddenly felt alive

 

It struck me like a lightening after a great storm

Altering correct matches seems destiny’s norm

I want to solve jumble of fate lines on my palm

Waiting a while to watch this game will do no harm

 

 Why wish for results just worship efforts

Just move on with hurt and always wait for reverts

this is the only ray of hope that can be seen

God will be merciful towards my being

 

You stumble, sparkle and smile enchanting me

You deny ignore and avoid encircling me

I tried to move far away only to be back around

You control your dazzle but get more profound

 

I will pray my star of hope to see you rise and shine

Will surely solve this puzzle one day and all will be fine

I will face all storms and failures and withstand them alone

Light of your sparkle will suffice me to live when you will be long gone

 

……By Manpreet Kaur Matharoo

© copyright Wed Dec 14 06:50:22 UTC 2011 - All Rights Reserved

Reviews

[Arielle Ann]

you should turn professional...your poems are just like the ones we used to read in textbooks :)

[BlueDreams]

A very effective craft.. Impressed .... :-)

[MS. BABy]

This was so beautiful, I love the script and the wording you have out done yourself with this one....

[Sakib]

I would love to read it again and again. Awesome!! The flow of the poem and the images that you have captured is tremendous. This is my favorite. :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

A wonderful poem, beautifully penned. I enjoyed reading this this morning. It brought to me a calm, that I need today. Thanks!