teeth

teeth

A Poem by Manya
"

we are privileged enough to be presented with opportunities....

"
His milk teeth broke 
because it was about time 
Hers broke 
because she didn't clean the sink right 

© 2019 Manya


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dentists cost so much now...and dental insurance outrageous...and there are those who just can't afford the survival of their teeth...
the rich cut their teeth on wealth...others, just watch them fall out.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Manya

1 Month Ago

Thanks for stopping by,
again an astute way to bring out
this is as stark an expression as any I have seen so much packed in those few lines. My heart hurts from reading this:( dear Manya

Posted 2 Months Ago


Manya

2 Months Ago

thanks for stopping by,
hope you liked it
social evils are hurtful to us ''the privile.. read more
I finally got it
not a happy

Posted 2 Months Ago


Manya

2 Months Ago

hope you liked it...
Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

Very strong message in very few lines but not a pleasant reflection
Take care (more writing?)
Manya

2 Months Ago

more writing soon.....
we have exams here
-hurriedly
Manya

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Added on October 3, 2019
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