Frightful Morning

Free righting poetry in hopes to beat writers block

Monday mornings

They never we're my thing

Especially when little children cried throughout the night

Work was just around the corner

The alarm buzzed in my ear

I scowled and aggressively hit snooze

It went off again.

Groaning, I placed my feet on the ice cold wood

I could already tell

It was going to be one of those days.

Author's Note

Please keep in mind this is a random, quick write. This is definitely not my best.

Reviews

[Brandon]

i just really like this because it makes me feel about everything single day i have to wake up and deal with things when you have that vibe of the day.

[Darksummerswind]

I love how this shows how much you hate Monday mornings. Take that writer's block!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

For a random, quick write, it certainly borders on the quirky, I love your sense of dread in the mundane, although I do love the structure of the piece, the last line would have been even more powerful if you added "in hell." at the end.