Listen to me

Hey you! Yes you! Hullo!
I’m talkin to you. Yes! To you!
Do you know waat I am talkin about?
No worries. If you don’t. I do.
You listen anyway, you motha
Coz your here to listen
I’m here to tell you, you f***a
coz you don’t know nothin from s**t
So listen and listen carefully
Stop screwin around!
You don’t seem to know much
So you need to listen to me
Though you not fit to hear me
I’ll still bestow on you
My learning an my wisdom
Be thankful I’m even considerin
you worthy of it, you motha
be grateful for me, to yer God
who sent you me, so you know
I’m your only chance of salvation
Only chance to beat your
sorry miserable existence,
Hey you! Yes you!
You f****n little fool
Stop dat s**t an just keep listenin
You motha! Just keep listenin to me

Author's Note

My copper chopper

Reviews

[Archishman Rick]

Haha, now this is a poem that packs a mean punch! Loved the ghetto vibes. No nonsense and robustly candid. The poem may have an overtone of condescension but it sounds more like it wants to incentivize in a sassy way. I agree with Brilliance's take that the words need to be heard by World politicians haha. Hope you would share more of your creative outputs. Good read.
Regards.

[Miss Marlette]

Thank u so very!

[Paul Bell]

Well, that's straight to the point. Just as I was about to break every law, every commandant, I get stopped in my tracks by the copper chopper. Feel like I've been saved from a life of crime and debauchery.

[Miss Marlette]

thank u so much

[;)]

Sounds like something the World's politicians need to hear. Grab their attention, pull their ears like the little children they are, and make them listen to the people. I never knew that our guardian angels had such foul mouths! The standards must be slipping up there in Heaven! Clever and quite hilarious, this write.

[Miss Marlette]

thank u so much

[Richard🖌]

Well, Lady Prissy! 🤔

I must say, you're certainly a compellingly captivating poetess, but ohhh so bashful … ha-hahhh!
I love it when a woman speaks her mind, setting the tone in her own way … it's, sorta, gripping and won't let go … ummm, I like it!
So, it must be what I need, eh? ; )

Welcome aboard, Prissy … I think you'll be a hit here.
I'm listenin', I'm listenin'! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Miss Marlette]

very many thanks