Bad Bad Day

I had a bad day

My face couldn't hide it

Abandoned amid the shame

Trying to find someone

Standing there for me

When I just fell

Into the hole of fool

The thousands of mistakes I made

Had turned me into a clown

Hardly I tried to hold my tears

Disguising my sadness

Looking for a melody to wash away

Pouring my gloominess into a poem

I had a bad bad day

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I think ya were sad when ya dropped it........loved it by the a=way......wawercdfef....
yer wordings are pretty cool...

The thousands of mistakes I made
Had turned me into a clown
Hardly I tried to hold my tears
Disguising my sadnesss......sssssssss.........these lines are good.

[Sami Khalil]

Looking for a melody to wash away

Pouring my gloominess into a poem
My faves in this nice poem...:)