Awakened

Awakened

A Poem by thatscenechikkmarie(:

Awakened by the saddness in your eyes,

I feel you calling out to me, reaching for me.

Awakened by the softness of your touch,

Knowing im safe and unharmed with you.

 

Awakened by the love in your voice,

Speaking to me in the clear words of romance.

Awakened by your being,

Having you with me makes it possible to live.

 

Awakened by the dream of tomorrow,

and what the future might hold.

Awakened by your life,

and how the breath of you is just enough...

 

Awakened by the rush of addiction,

as i start to crave you more and more.

Awakened by the cold,

the truth of reality.

 

Awakened from my dreams,

and plunged into this nightmare.

Awakened by the thought,

of you, never existing.

 

Awakened are many,

from the darkness of life.

Awakened are many,

who share the same role as me.

© 2011 thatscenechikkmarie(:


Author's Note

thatscenechikkmarie(:
not my best, should go to sleep and come back to writing.. best ideas come to me at this time. just, tell me what you think. please no negativity.

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now why hasn't anyone reviewed this before? this was very great, i sure loved this one! are you sure this was not your best? if so i sure can't wait to read what you consider your Magnum Opuses.
this was also thought-provoking in my opinion.

"Awakened are many,
from the darkness of life.
Awakened are many,
who share the same role as me."
good work here!


Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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now why hasn't anyone reviewed this before? this was very great, i sure loved this one! are you sure this was not your best? if so i sure can't wait to read what you consider your Magnum Opuses.
this was also thought-provoking in my opinion.

"Awakened are many,
from the darkness of life.
Awakened are many,
who share the same role as me."
good work here!


Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Heya(: im mariee. im a pretty easy goin, laid back chick, inbox me if ya wana know more (: {altime fav color: limegreen} i mostly write poetry.. i enjoy it. i am unique and i dont like to fit in.. .. more..

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