simple. YOU.

I dreamt of you once,

a beautiful nightmare.

 

I thought of you often,

overwhelming my mind.

 

I wished for you once,

on a shooting star.

 

I waited for you to come,

you were all my hopes wanted.

 

I cried for you,

in the darkness of the night.

 

I wanted you more,

when you flooded my head.

 

I screamed for you,

when i couldn't handle this anymore.

 

I became furious with you,

for you weren't true.

 

I lost all hope in you,

and slumbered in my depression.

 

I'll cry for you,

until we meet again.

Author's Note

eh.. just a poem..

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

about time i repay you the favor of you reviewing my work, methinks. this was very well-written, impressive stuff here, this was very good.

"I wished for you once,
on a shooting star.

I waited for you to come,
you were all my hopes wanted.

I cried for you,
in the darkness of the night.

I wanted you more,
when you flooded my head."
powerful words!

[Tony]

People can really impact our lives on so many levels can't they-- even when we've been hurt we still "cry" for them. Evocative write-- well done.

[Jim Parson]

eh.. just a poem.. just a very good poem. So very heart-felt and moving.

[An owl on the moon]

Your words express so well how one person can make up our world... The good and the bad.. the beauty and the pain. Vivid and honest.