Memories

Memories

A Poem by Mariel
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A haiku about the memories of one.

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MEMORIES:

Like faded pictures,
Disappearing and coming,
A refuge, a curse

© 2011 Mariel


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Last line nailed it for me... I think this is great. I'm sure we all have memories that haunt us... possibly things we'd even done we'd wish we could take back.. or at least purge from our minds. Not sure for anyone else, but this was rather powerful for me. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I really like this. Sorry Im not the most eloquent, but it captures the way I feel about a lot of my memories, especially of my ex. "disappearing and coming, a refuge, a curse."

Posted 12 Years Ago
Last line nailed it for me... I think this is great. I'm sure we all have memories that haunt us... possibly things we'd even done we'd wish we could take back.. or at least purge from our minds. Not sure for anyone else, but this was rather powerful for me. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on April 18, 2011
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Mariel
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Hey there everyone!! I play the violin and the piano, both for a very long time. I plan on playing the harp and the flute. I love New Age music, and it helps me when I write. Anyways, I love writing, .. more..

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