YOU

YOU

A Poem by Dave


                              YOU

The moon shines bright yet fades in the glow of you.

Stars sparkle in the darkened heavens, but not as you.

Fresh as a morning in Spring, ground wet with dew,

nothing transcends the beauty I find in you.

How can it be that you come to me,

you a goddess that i can love and see

Soft and tender, all eternity it would take,

my not wanting to adore you to shake.  

So come again to me and again let us be,

together let us build on a sweet memory

of a love so whole, honest and true,

a love whose very core is you.








© 2019 Dave


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Tender and romantic lines here Dave. A great deal of love shown for the "You" that has been written about. Some lovely imagery here as well. All good wishes.

Chris



Posted 4 Days Ago


Dave

3 Days Ago

Thank you Chris - I'm glad you liked it.
I hope that all is well with you as they are here.<.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

3 Days Ago

All good Dave. Best to you.
extremely romantic words here, and profession of love.
the subject of this poem would have to be muchly moved.
j.

Posted 4 Days Ago



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Bridgewater, NJ



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David B. Pincus I am a retired teacher. I have taught in grades 5th-8th in New Jersey. I am married and have two grown daughters and four grandsons. I enjoy playing tennis and traveling. With m.. more..

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