Evening Rain

Evening Rain

A Poem by Maroon Surreal
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Describing.

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The little raindrops

Hitting the roof,

I am hearing from the ceiling,

Gives the evening

A cold breeze

And an inviting blue feeling.

© 2012 Maroon Surreal


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On odd melancholy, somewhat reflective mood overtakes me. Calm. Glad to be in, hearing nature's white noise. Well worded.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The title attracted me. This poem is short and sweet. I love the "inviting blue feeling". What a great description!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You explain the dropping of the soul's emotion during the evening when rain descends from the sky in an excellent way. There's so many thoughts behind such few words in this piece. Simply put, a short but amazing poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so true, i think thats y i dnt mind the rain any more, i like it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it. So much said in so few words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 19, 2012
Last Updated on April 16, 2012
Tags: writing, poem, poetry, evening, night, rain, raining, home, cold, blue, feeling

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Maroon Surreal
Maroon Surreal

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Candles and fading sheets, I write my heart of bits. I write poems and other short stories. Really short stories. I'm still learning and willing to learn more, read more and write more. I like .. more..

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