If Only

If Only

A Poem by Maroon Surreal

At night, when I'm all alone

When I remain wondering at home

About how better my life could be

If things could've been different

Or if only I obeyed my parents

Sorrows deep in my heart

If I could only go back from the start

And change things the way they should

If only the heavens will grant

I would, for I am tired

With how my existence

Had never been good.

© 2012 Maroon Surreal


Author's Note

Maroon Surreal
Correct the grammar errors please, if there is any. I just feel there is/are.

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A deeply profound write, Maroon, from the depths of your soul. Its hard living with regrets, but you have to move on the best you can, and hopefully, down the road you return to places and mend broken fences.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We all wonder "what if". It's just part of life!

Great poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Im bad with grammar but i loved it, and anybody whos somebody can relate to that lol. im quite sure.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nope, looks good to me the way it is. If only we had a rewind button. Oh, a pause rewind and fast forward button would be good too.
Wonderfully written, as always. Feel the if onlys running through this write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Maroon Surreal
Maroon Surreal

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Candles and fading sheets, I write my heart of bits. I write poems and other short stories. Really short stories. I'm still learning and willing to learn more, read more and write more. I like .. more..

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