Come Love Me

Written in the middle of a boring class

A single touch by your hand
and everything inside flies away
whatever remains churns and spins
I feel stung by a thousand pins
then I fall away
by a single touch by you
please, come love me


For slowly, I feel myself falling
for lowly, my heart keeps calling
let it happen, let us be
for if love is forever
then come love me


sometimes
how you walk towards me
a walk
that hides the dance, the smile, the joy
yes, that walk
but all you give away is your smile
in that smile, my heart you lock
come take my hand
for I may neve find a place to dock
let me take you to a land, lush
no hurry, no rush
just me and you
a love easy
come love me
not starve me

Reviews

[B30]

I liked 'For slowly, I feel myself falling
for lowly, my heart keeps calling
let it happen, let us be
for if love is forever
then come love me', that was unexpected and touching.

Great writing, there was a lot of depth.

[Marvin]

Thank you! :) . I appreciate it.

[Tasha]

Wow, I loved this. I liked how it rhymed at the beginning. This is nicely written for being bored in class. Great job.

[Marvin]

Thank you Tasha, you are doing good too!

[Tasha]

Thank you, and you're welcome!!