About me

Who am I?

I was the dust that once was the Chaos

I am a fragment of the world
I am a drop in the ocean of people that expands every day

My hair is the grass that is refreshed every morning - just like my life should be refreshed with every sunrise
My eyes are reflections of the Saturn's rings - just like they're reflections of many other things
My eyes are reflections of my soul, some say.
My laugh is written by the jokes, by the moments I've got saved in my pockets
My pockets are torn - letting the rain and storm in.
My hands are the carriage for those I care about, holding them tight, or only the words they couldn't bear alone
My mind and my heart are each other's antagonist.

My mind and my heart will find the agreement.
My hands will comfort the ones I love and the burden will leave them
My pocket will got filled with dirt - drying the rain away.
My laugh won't be for forever, but the memory of it will remain
My eyes won't reflect anything, as my soul will be gone.
My eyes won't reflect anything - as they'll be closed like I'm in a dream
My hair will turn to hay - my life will stop refreshing, too

I will be a drop in the ocean of people that expands every day
I will be a fragment of the world

I will again be the dust that once was the Chaos

Who will I be?

Reviews

[...]

Very nice words . I CAN INSIDE FLOW. UNTILL MY HEART BLOW.

[RileyRedding]

I find myself enveloped in this cosmic darkness.

Keep up the work, you're definitely coming into your own transgressive style.

[burnhouse]

Means a lot coming from you.

[Confuser]

It is fabulous and I love it. The writing is very intriguing; interesting and absolutely wonderful writing. Thank you so very, very much Mary. Dale

[burnhouse]

Thank /you/; for the time and nice encouraging words.

[Confuser]

You're welcome. Dale....

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Mary,

Love the pic. Aren't you an interesting one? I would have to say so if I am allowed. Oh, I guess I am. I like this poetic introduction, but it may need a work on the flow. But being you are fifteen, yes I know I am sure many make this point and its quite annoying, your work will flow naturally.

But enough about all of that. I like that you are who you are and that is what is most important. You offer friendship and support. Yet have the understanding of your own weakness. As I see in the picture I think you have an Idea of what you would like to portray yourself as...a no not a skeleton, but someone who wont take herself too seriously. Yet have the confidence to put herself out there.

With Love,

Matthew

[burnhouse]

Hello Matthew,

Thank you, the skeleton make-up is the face I like to wear the most. As for me being an interesting one, I can't say much, but hearing that does bring me joy, and so does me this review.
I see, especially after so much time passing, that this in not that readable or 'flowing', yes, will work on it happily, I appreciate you pointing that out. Also, thank you for the interpretation because I feel you're pretty close to the true me.

[Ruth]

Beautiful...in short, we are everything, good to remember that! x

[burnhouse]

Hahaha, exactly! Thank you.

[James Probert]

I really like this. Very good job indeed. You are a strong writer with a great imagination. :D

[burnhouse]

Thank you, thank you. :)