His eyes (10w)

His eyes (10w)

A Poem by Mary Helda
"

sometimes a look is enough to set you on fire

"
Dark smoldering eyes-
caressed me
and rode me to
Ecstacy....

© 2016 Mary Helda


Author's Note

Mary Helda
thank you:-)

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eyes that pulled you in, that you can drown in their depth i imagine if you get too lost, you will not be able to find your way out. eyes you can go on and on about, just from your words right here. see you have inspired me. simple to the point, and intriguing.

we all want to look into those eyes, but be careful, because you might get burned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

well i will try to be careful...thank you:-)



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One look can change everything. One look at it and I am like what a poem! Yeah this an awesome piece and yeah that guy's good ^.~

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Hahaa..yeah..thank you:-)
Now I'm jealous....maybe I need contacts

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

hahahaha,it depends,what colour are your eyes?
SuspectGray

8 Years Ago

green eyes and yours?
Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

ahhh,green eyes,well then you have no reason to be jealous,you dont need contacts:-):-):-)...mine ar.. read more
Short, sweet, and to the point. Powerful feelings expressed in just a few words! It's very lovely. ^_^

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Thank you:-)
Wow, this poem is very short but proves that one look can change everything. You depicted that very well!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

thank you so much
nice personification appears here....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Thank you sir:-)
You will possible at some time find how much I like short verse. And you hit one out of the park with this one. Very well done. And with so few words and very subtle erotica. Nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Why..thank you:-)...and from your pieces,i can tell you love short verse. i believe they carry so mu.. read more
The eyes that make and mar..BEWARE. Nice!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

i will be....thank you dear poet:-)
wow ! eyes are windows to the soul,-very well penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

thank you sweetheart:-)
Those eyes can steal our heart and dreams. A outstanding poem dear Poet.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

thank you sir:-)
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on January 11, 2016
Last Updated on January 18, 2016
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Mary Helda
Mary Helda

Kampala, Christian, Uganda



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