Smothered

Smothered

A Poem by Mary Katherine
"

just a poem

"

can't do this because it might turn out badly

can't say that it might offend someone

can't dream that because it might not happen

can't feel that because i don't understand

can't jump, i might fall

can't dive, i might drown

can't live, i might not survive

 

breaking through

I CAN

© 2008 Mary Katherine


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Short and simple.

And the title as well. Which, I might add, fits very well.

I just realized there's nothing actually /good/ in this review.

Um...

Very well done! Sorry. Reviews--not my strong suite.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great short poem, very apt title, like this very much

Posted 14 Years Ago


very nicely expressed. its always nice to push past what people say one cannot do. im a big fan of rebelling against the 'norms' in most cases.

Posted 14 Years Ago


the title compliments this perfectly it just absolutely fit it to a t great poem

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 26, 2008

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