Smothered

just a poem

can't do this because it might turn out badly

can't say that it might offend someone

can't dream that because it might not happen

can't feel that because i don't understand

can't jump, i might fall

can't dive, i might drown

can't live, i might not survive

 

breaking through

I CAN

Reviews

[Rain Bo]

Short and simple.

And the title as well. Which, I might add, fits very well.

I just realized there's nothing actually /good/ in this review.

Um...

Very well done! Sorry. Reviews--not my strong suite.

[Sally Edwards]

Great short poem, very apt title, like this very much

[Monners]

very nicely expressed. its always nice to push past what people say one cannot do. im a big fan of rebelling against the 'norms' in most cases.

[imnoromeo215]

the title compliments this perfectly it just absolutely fit it to a t great poem