6 Feet Under

Just end the pain.

All these guys are the same.

They take and take,

and then it's my mistake for falling for it.

Well, no more.

I'm done.

I let him hold my heart,

and he just tore it all apart.

Take me some place far away.

I'm so broken, that's all I can say.

I cross my heart and sincerely hope I die,

while i'm here letting myself cry.

I've held all my emotions in for so long.

I honestly belong 6 feet under.

I'm sick of this place;

i'm sick of my own face.

I'm sick of the fear;

I'm sick of shedding all these tears.

I don't deserve to live.

I wish I was dead.

I wish all these thoughts would just leave my head.

Why did you choose me?

Can't you see i'm broken?

If you love me, Lord, take away my pain.

End my suffering.

I'm no longer sane.

Reviews

[CuddlyBunny]

me again...
you think these men are all the same so useless and f*****g lame but you've yet to meet the one whom which has shared deceit one whom which shall kneel at your feet some day somehow you too shall share vows some day somehow its his heart that you will tame

[EJ's Horror]

I liked it, though I found the gender barrier difficult to understand (my fault not yours) Which is why I'm reading this.

[Nico Marie]

Thank you.

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Very good rhyming and flow. Sharp message about your world. Yes people can hurt and people can love. very nice.

[Nico Marie]

Thank you.

[Najam Us Saher]

Your words had very deep meaning. I liked this one.
I can understand and feel your pain. This feeling ends one day if you give a chance. Just be strong.

[Nico Marie]

Thank you.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.