This Sucks!

This Sucks!

A Poem by Maryum Mazhar

The school bus forgot me

Hot humid long day

I lost my new iPod

School sure sucks this way

 

Same boring old lessons

Ughh! Tore my new jeans

Crap, just failed my math test!

Knees scraped from the seams.

 

Sooooo....Is today ending anytime soon?

© 2012 Maryum Mazhar


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Lovely piece.
It really sucks!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice structure , added with lots of humor and imagination together...
Liked it..

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Haha, I really loved the humor and the format of this one. Some days do feel like a drag, but that's why we learn to adapt. I enjoyed reading this a lot! Great job on it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes the longest days just drag out till it seems it will never end. The format you chose really added to the effect of the poem and the feelings you conveyed. this is a great write and i look forward to reading more!

Posted 8 Years Ago


As if the the world and the forces of nature have conspired to make your day get worse when you least expect to. lol I would say don't worry be happy, but then that'd probably jinx the whole thing. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hahahah lol =) Awesome poem sweetie! =)

Posted 8 Years Ago


You have captured one of my childhood school days perfectly! Imaginative and creative. Well done!


Posted 8 Years Ago


Great poem ! simple and funny description of a sucky day !

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is funny. I like this poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is very creative.
I like the way you wrote it.
Very nice write.


Posted 8 Years Ago



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Maryum Mazhar
Maryum Mazhar

Mississaauga, Canada



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So weird. My old about-me still said I'm 14. Well, I'm 16 now, I feel like the person who made this account wasn't me. Anyway, Hi! My name is Maryum. I draw, write and eat. more..

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