This Sucks!

This Sucks!

A Poem by Maryum Mazhar

The school bus forgot me

Hot humid long day

I lost my new iPod

School sure sucks this way


Same boring old lessons

Ughh! Tore my new jeans

Crap, just failed my math test!

Knees scraped from the seams.


Sooooo....Is today ending anytime soon?

© 2012 Maryum Mazhar

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Lovely piece.
It really sucks!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Nice structure , added with lots of humor and imagination together...
Liked it..

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Haha, I really loved the humor and the format of this one. Some days do feel like a drag, but that's why we learn to adapt. I enjoyed reading this a lot! Great job on it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes the longest days just drag out till it seems it will never end. The format you chose really added to the effect of the poem and the feelings you conveyed. this is a great write and i look forward to reading more!

Posted 8 Years Ago

As if the the world and the forces of nature have conspired to make your day get worse when you least expect to. lol I would say don't worry be happy, but then that'd probably jinx the whole thing. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Hahahah lol =) Awesome poem sweetie! =)

Posted 8 Years Ago

You have captured one of my childhood school days perfectly! Imaginative and creative. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Great poem ! simple and funny description of a sucky day !

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is funny. I like this poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

this is very creative.
I like the way you wrote it.
Very nice write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on October 7, 2011
Last Updated on July 2, 2012


Maryum Mazhar
Maryum Mazhar

Mississaauga, Canada

So weird. My old about-me still said I'm 14. Well, I'm 16 now, I feel like the person who made this account wasn't me. Anyway, Hi! My name is Maryum. I draw, write and eat. more..


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