Losing my hold

Losing my hold

A Poem by Maskedthoughts

You're the cost of my sanity 
Hold on I can hardly breathe 
Your eyes twist into my soul 
One look powerful enough to make me lose my hold 
Your smile lights the fire in me 
It makes it so I can hardly see 
Your hair catches the light 
Causing the sparks to ignite 
Your soul dances out to play with mine; lights up my whole world and makes it shine 
Your mind challenges me taking me on a journey that I never expected to be 
Your everything seeks me out in the night, you silence the fight with in 
Your body is making me want to sin 
Your being is beckoning me into the light I can't even put up a fight 
Your it for me
It's settled it's done 
I don't want to run, not this time 
Not from you 
Because I don't know what you do 
But I'm magnetized and you are the only pole I respond to 
It's just me and you 

Baby, come on and take me away 
Make me forget the day 
With you I lay my heart 
Yours hits me like a dart 
It's you and me 
And me and you 
Trust me darling this isn't through. 

© 2014 Maskedthoughts


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Beautiful, intoxicating, moving, emotional, heartfelt and romantic.
This is filled with all these emotions.
You truly have wrote your heart out in this piece.
Lucky guy to have you feeling this way about him. Have you showed him this piece?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Maskedthoughts

9 Years Ago

Wow that is one of the nicest reviews I have ever gotten, thank you! And no I have not...maybe I wil.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

Your welcome anytime. I try :P
You should :)

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Added on December 19, 2014
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Maskedthoughts
Maskedthoughts

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"As a writer if someone falls in love with my work, I know they have fallen in love with my mind. Having no idea what my face looks like, they chose my mind. Art may be the only place a women can hold.. more..

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