My Façade Broken

My Façade Broken

A Poem by MassThinker
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A very short poem.

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My façade was broken and
made useless, therefor
my soul unprotected
and kevlar decayed
.


The creator will state,
here you shall stay
till your story has
died and been
lost in time.


Now you
finally
end.

© 2013 MassThinker


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MassThinker
Any criticsm is welcomed.

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A wonderful short poem too...

YB

Posted 7 Years Ago


MassThinker

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, YB. :)
The title , the form and the poem were all great ...Thank you for penning...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


MassThinker

7 Years Ago

Likewise, thank you for reading, I appreciate it! :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Very nicely written, dude. :))

Posted 7 Years Ago


MassThinker

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! :)
Prime

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.. :)
Even though people have attacked our strength, our resilience must remain intact till the end...we go on even after the damage has been done, nicely pen'd.

Posted 7 Years Ago


MassThinker

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Frieda.

And you are absolutely right. We overcome hardship and move on this is .. read more
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

The pleasure was mine MT....
I like this especially the ending lines.. Felt like the story book has come to an end.. Font too small on the laptop at least for my eyes.. I assume you are working from a desktop? Good poem.. shallimarRose

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MassThinker

7 Years Ago

Hey!
Thanks for checking me out, appreciate it.
I will increase the text size, I’m alw.. read more

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Added on September 17, 2013
Last Updated on September 18, 2013
Tags: poetry, short, facades, faces, roles

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