1815

The Battle of Waterloo Recreated...

 They regicide, we campaign: blood, flesh and terror

 camouflage your eyes, afield from the world of error

 napoleon, ney: saints of death! are they near?

 give me truce, death, or mere freedom to fear!

 

 Unity undone, amity abstract, most glee apart 

 those days of comity, will it ever again start?

 mock the genre of rats, a comrade to horrors

 man is the prey and human beasts predators.

 Came the French army, for more power, more enmity

 do I have the fate, to fight, to exist, or am I to infinity

 my heart bled for her, hex the clamoring recruitment

 forced to leave my love, coerced to join the regiment.

 Every me in the Prussians, prayed, every big and small

 petitioned god, a communal dream, the napoleon fall

 Our women awaited blood, every news from war

 We'll fight, for them, for life, but never for honor or star.

                                                                     THE END

Historical Note: 

The Battle of Waterloo takes place near the Waterloo, Belgium on June 18, 1815. In this battle, the forces of the French Empire under the leadership of Michael Ney and Napoleon Bonaparte were defeated by the Seventh Coalition and a Prussian Army, which was commanded by Gebhard Von Blucher. The Battle of Waterloo puts an end to the tyrant rule of Napoleon as the emperor of France. (From Google)

Author's Note

Emotional side of a conscripted man....

Reviews

[Emily Quinn]

This is the kind of writing I deeply enjoy and am always searching to find. It's not a mere poem of entertainment purposes or only to express, it is about real issues, real world battles of various kinds (dictatorship being one of them) and that is what I absolutely love.

Now, moving onto the writing itself. The way you wote each line with kind of two different subjects- almost seeming to be 2 seperate lines in themselves separated by one form of punctuation or another- was a great was to make the poem more impactful. The words feels like hard, quick punches as you read due to these quick stops. You had great imagery and emotion; I couldn't help but feel blood rush to my cheeks with anger...and then you mention "she" which suddenly turns the poem personal and my mood changed to grief and compassion. For me, thats a good indication of a well written peice of literature.

I would be intested in reading more writing if you choose to add more to the site.

[MissSpazztastic]

I love this! Best battle ever fought!

[Lilly]

Very strong piece and informative too. Great descriptions and images. Really great piece

[Rachel]

Omg... This is wonderful... This is special... A full chapter of history written in 16 beautiful lines... An entertaining read and a variety genre of poetry.. history..
Splendid job...

[Ann John]

Perfect..... One of the best poems I have ever read... It is short but awesomely superb... Powerful words, great style, fine use of language, apt punctuation....etc... It was a great recreation of history.... The mood was well set, I was very much drawn into it... nice imagery, sentimentalism, everything...

[Shiela]

Perfect write on such a famous historical event, good rhyme scheme, rhythm backing up ur vocabulary. well done yaar.

[Omar Fendri]

I'm not that good in history, but reading the historical information that you added it I understand it.
The way you write a poem in order to talk about a real touchable story is already a talent. I enjoy it, I enjoy the words (that were difficult), I enjoy the meaning and the creation... It's perfect :)

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Matthews,

Excellent work my friend. I not only enjoyed the overall poem but the little hint of lose and bitterness toward this scenerio. Having to leave his love who only awaits word of blood. Just excellent. Mastery at it's finest.

Well done.

Regards,

Matthew without the S

[Victor P Vigil Jr]

Nicely done! I would love to see more of your work.

[Laura]

That is really good

[Jonathan De Elvira]

wow!! I mean just wow!!..
you converted the real incident and made me being in there!!..
those bloodshed, the violence, the deaths...oh you're good...
my fav...simply because there's a sense of being there while I read it...