Green: Galena, Gelid

Green: Galena, Gelid

A Poem by Jesse Lancaster
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Some haikus I wrote over the course of my senior year in math class. I hate math.

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Small, wet, cold, fragile
Your succubi eyes lie well,
 try my best to blink
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I don't know you well
But I'm thinking I'd like to
tell me something new?


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my seams snag on you
sweet nostalgia won't let go
weak limbs lose their sense

© 2011 Jesse Lancaster




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hehe~ i like/hate math, depends on the teacher's way of teaching.
i love it!
"my seams snag on you
sweet nostalgia won't let fo
weak limbs lose their sense"
i love this the most. hehe~

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your talent. asd;flkj. the amount you possess is unfair.
i love these. [:

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Added on August 30, 2011
Last Updated on August 31, 2011
Tags: Succubi, seams, snag, sweet, aliteration!, nostalgia, tell, me, something, new

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Jesse Lancaster
Jesse Lancaster

Manchester, CT



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I'm Jesse Lancaster. No I'm not. I am: 19 And now: @ Uni for my sophomore year. My writing draws heavy influences from the music I listen to, other writers (such as Chuck Palahniuk, John Green a.. more..

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