cheerio parody of cheerleader by Omi

Some credit goes to my friend Sam[antha] for the original swapping of the word cheerleader for cheerio.

Cheerio (parody of cheerleader by Omi)

When I need breakfast cereal
My one solution are the hoops
Cause their fruit loops
Yeah yeah
They are always in my cupboard
Right there when I want them
All these other things are tempting
But life's empty without Colour
But I say

Do you see it
Do you think it's pretty
Does it make you feel like switching
And I'm like no not really but

Oh I think that I found myself a cheerio
What's it doing in my fruit loops I don't know
Oh I think that I found myself a cheerio
What's it doing in my loops I just don't know

But Is it like a model
It doesn't grant my wishes
Like a Wheaty without colour
Yeah yeah
Cause I'm the wiz at eating loops
And this has got the wrong shade
All these other things are tempting
But life's empty without colour
But I say

Do you see it
Do you think it's pretty
Does it make you feel like switching
And I'm like no not really but

Oh I think that I found myself a cheerio
What's it doing in my fruit loops I don't know
Oh I think that I found myself a cheerio
What's it doing in my loops I just don't know

They give my tummy some affection
Filled a hole did I mention
It's the only thing for me
Maybe I need a next one
Mama loves it too
But thinks She may have one question
And now all that's left to do
is to find and answer to her question

Oh I think that I found myself a cheerio
What's it doing in my fruit loops I don't know
Oh I think that I found myself a cheerio
What's it doing in my loops I just don't know

Author's Note

Some parts can be hard to get right but when you do it all fits. This a simple version without marks like verse, bridge ect. I don't know how many versions of this song there are but these lyrics are for "Cheerleader (Felix Jaehn Remix Radio Edit)"

Reviews

[Stan Lee]

Laughing my head off right now. Gosh, this was hilarious. I loved it. (And no, i'm not the sort of person that says that about everything. honest.) I laughed so much. Great job! Very funny. :D

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

Thank you. A friend gave me some of the lyrics though im not happy with the second verse and currently re writing it. I feel kinda bad this is my second piece you have reviewed and I still haven't read anything of yours. Is their anything in particular you would like me to review when I get more than 5 minutes. Be warned I WILL be honest. You may not like what I say though I always try to be constructive and if I offend... Well it's happened but never intentional.

[Stan Lee]

:) That's fine. Take your time and I welcome constructive criticism so by all means be honest. I'm used to it. Most of the ones I have published have survived the scathing reviews... so i hope you enjoy. Nothing in particular... not the poetry though.
THANKS! :)

ps. lmk when you have rewritten V2. I'd like to check it out. :)