Beginning Of Hope

Beginning Of Hope

A Story by Matty Bosox
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This isthe story of Rain Hope Branaby....This is just the prologue so its not much but its definitly a change up from my Gaurdian Angel Project....Tell me what you think about the start

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RAIN HOPE BARNABY: CHARACTER INSPIRED BY EMMA STONE

TYLER ROWE: CHARACTER INSPIRED BY SHIA LEBOUF

JASON MARSH: CHARACTER INSPIRED BY JOSH HARTNETT

JENNI HASTINGS: CHARACTER INSPIRED BY HAYDEN PENETEIRRE

KRISTINE BARNABY: CHARACTER INSPIRED BY JULIANNE MOORE

PRIME: CHARACTER INSPIRED BY LIV SCHRIEBER

TOMB: CHARACTER INSPIRED BY DENZEL WASHINGTON

My mother always called me her miracle baby...She was the one person in life I always looked up to, the one person I could always count on, my hero to be honest...That was until my 12th birthday when, during my party I might add, she picked up and left me alone with a bunch of people I hardly knew...Greatest present I ever recieved...Suffice it to say, my life was always sucky like that....My awesome mommy did leave me with one small tidbit of info as she was on the verge of totally losing her mind "One day you will realize why this is happening"...Pretty straight forward, especially for a 12 year old who had no idea of anything outside the box that was her mother....My name is Rain Hope Barnaby...Oddly enough, out of all the things I did get made fun of and tormented for while growing up, my name wasn't one of them...My mom said my father gave me the name to "carry as a great responsibility"....She said it was an honor bestowed upon me by a higher power...S**t...No wonder the old lady went psycho...Speaking of my father, he was always the biggest mystery in my life...One month after I was born and he was sure I was in good health he felt it his duty to leave...Once again more reason to be visiting mommy in the psych-ward these days...One thing she always reasurred me of was that no matter how long and dark the storm...the sun will follow...The one thing she was dead on about...It was three years after she ditched me that I met my true hero, my true love, my one and only rock in my life...It was the freshman year of my highschool nightmare, or so I thought...That is until I met Jason Marsh and it seemed as though that sun my mother was talking about had finally arrived..

© 2012 Matty Bosox


Author's Note

Matty Bosox
This is story I just started on...This is the prologue so you won't really get much out of it yet but I think its looking pretty good-

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Okay Matty,

I must inform you that, without reading another piece of this, I am most interested. You see, you have all of the qualities any publisher or reader is looking for to become hooked!!!

The bait is on, the line test is good, and the weight holds... my word.

You have the makings of a writer - coming from the perspective of "a writer" I would say this... on a rather less hectic day, a day I can sit back with my feet up and relax, I would choose to have this book in front of me rather than the television! (or FaceBook)

Bravo, excellent job! I will indeed delve in, when I can finally put my feet up and relax.

Thank you,

Legacy

Oh, P.S. would you do me a huge favor? I see you read a ton of writes and review the like. If you would be so kind and spread the kindness to one of my writes?

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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matty Bosox

11 Years Ago

Well Legacy, it seems that cute little firey redhead's story is really catching alot of attention..... read more



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Amazing prologue! I actually think you can get quite alot from this about things which may or may not happen. It captured my interest anyway! I got some of your read requests for your later additions to this story so i thought i would start at the beginning, and i will definatley be contining to read! This is my kind of story! Cant wait to read more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Okay Matty,

I must inform you that, without reading another piece of this, I am most interested. You see, you have all of the qualities any publisher or reader is looking for to become hooked!!!

The bait is on, the line test is good, and the weight holds... my word.

You have the makings of a writer - coming from the perspective of "a writer" I would say this... on a rather less hectic day, a day I can sit back with my feet up and relax, I would choose to have this book in front of me rather than the television! (or FaceBook)

Bravo, excellent job! I will indeed delve in, when I can finally put my feet up and relax.

Thank you,

Legacy

Oh, P.S. would you do me a huge favor? I see you read a ton of writes and review the like. If you would be so kind and spread the kindness to one of my writes?

Also, we have a website:

www.stonetobread.org

Please, become a member, takes a second and it is free to join and participate!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matty Bosox

11 Years Ago

Well Legacy, it seems that cute little firey redhead's story is really catching alot of attention..... read more
Interesting. Like the background that you are establishing. This gives me a view on how to expand my own style. I will look at the rest of the chapters as time permits.
Even though you say it is the prologue, the beginning only gives you the hope of what may follow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matty Bosox

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Jon....I always appreciate the reviews....This story seems to be getting the mos.. read more
Brilliant beginning.
Sweet and very hooking. You instantly draw in your reader and leave them gagging for more. Wonderful

Posted 11 Years Ago


Matty Bosox

11 Years Ago

Its funny that you say that....I always tell people who ask me about writing and how they should sta.. read more
Ama May Cooper

11 Years Ago

Perfectly said! I totally agree , the beginning is one of the most important parts of a story, its t.. read more
great start here! i really like how you used the 1st POV and how you established the tone of the story, well at least the prologue. :) it made me want to read more. off to the next one! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matty Bosox

11 Years Ago

Thanks Goth I really appreciate it alot...You guys know I LOVE reviewing your stuff but I also like .. read more
Gothic Girl

11 Years Ago

you're right. it's the writer's fuel. :) i really struggled at first because i didn't know if what i.. read more
Matty Bosox

11 Years Ago

Tha is what keeps a writer writing, its extremely rare to find a writer who just wants to write for .. read more
Enough information to keep the reader interested. In my opinion I think you did a good job in this prologue.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Am excited for the rest!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think this is gona be great, and I can't wait to read more! No typos or corrections for the grammer, but watch out, I'm like a vulture for these things...

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow awesome .....cant wait to see more

Posted 11 Years Ago


Matty Bosox

11 Years Ago

Thanks Afra...And let me tell ya something...Keep up the excellent writing...It seems like your writ.. read more
afra

11 Years Ago

thank you
I can certainly hear her "voice". I think it's very good! I look forward to reading more!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Matty Bosox

11 Years Ago

Thank you...I love using inspirations for my characters so you can get a real feel for what the char.. read more

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Added on July 25, 2012
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Matty Bosox
Matty Bosox

Wyoming, PA



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My name is Matt, I live in eastern Pennsylvania....I have been working on the same writing project for the past ten years....Everybody loves it...I have also been trying to get it out there to the pub.. more..

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