no more

My friend wrote it

May dreams be brought that I might reach...
The gentle strains of midnight speech....
And frozen stars that gild the forest floor....
and this is where I want to be no more.....

Author's Note

So this is a piece that my friend wrote and he would like to know what you think of it...please do review. Thanks

Reviews

[R Smith]

In my opinion Maumil its a lovely piece, the first line takes me to a land i often dream of, it does not exist but its in my head and that's what counts, the second line has me thinking of laying in bed at night and just whispering to a loved one of everything and anything, those frozen stars on the forest floor its the imagination in this that stretches my imagination and i love that feeling, this is where i want to be no more, indeed i don't, i want to be in that forest in my head that does not exist but is beautiful to see, so here we have four lines that create a magical story, i would tell your friend to continue writing as soon as possible for he/she has a gift to give us, thank you Maumil :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

Thanks so much Richard for the beautiful review you left...he would be very pleased :)

[R Smith]

you are very welcome Maumil :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the short and strong statements. Took the reader on a journey. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[underthemask]

I wish more people wrote like this. It is beautiful and can be brought to life differently in the mind of each reader. I am curious as to what your friend was thinking as he wrote it. Truly amazing.

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

This is a deep piece with a lot of possible interpretations. Honestly, I had to read this thrice to come to a conclusion because the last line leaves the piece completely open to one's imaginative capabilities. I loved the piece totally because of the multiple possibilities of understanding it. The piece has a great romantic feeling to it. I totally connect to this beautiful place your friend is talking about and needless to say I'm head over heels in love with it. :) The description is absolutely spot on. I felt each and every word and tha is a great quality in a poet. Tell him he's amazing and to keep up e good work. Best wishes. :)

[Ana B.]

A very enchanting, profound piece, where mind travels to incredible lengths....Bravo :)

[sapna sagar]

bahot khoob apne friend ko kahiyega......likhna jaari rakhein.

[Maumil Mehraj]

Thanks! Zaroor kahungi

[sapna sagar]

ek baat or aap bahot achha or creative likhti hain....

[Maumil Mehraj]

Hahaa! Shukriya...aap bhi

[Reina Love]

Its beautiful and short but still beautiful.

[Maumil Mehraj]

Thanks for reading :) I appreciate!

[AaronFreitas]

It is a good piece... definitely a deep thought by your friend. I enjoyed it :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

I enjoyed it too. Thanks for stopping by, Aaron :)

[wordman]

froze,forest,stars and dreams,you done a great write

[Maumil Mehraj]

My friend was the writer here. Thanks for reviewing :)

[Rajat malik]

your friend wrote it well:) like you......
wish he/she would've joined this group of writers

[Maumil Mehraj]

I've been telling him that,Rajat. I'll convey your word, thanks!

[Rajat malik]

Hmmm.....you are welcome

[Marcel Grant]

I thought it was very lovely. The illustrations used are great, and not over the top.

[Maumil Mehraj]

I thought the same. Many thanks for leaving the review Marcel. Much appreciated!

[Marcel Grant]

You got it B)