Sound Current

What a Beautiful World, with all its Joys and Sorrow, Light and Darkness,

Universally Balanced, Sun complementing the Moon, All the Ying and Yang,

Everything Perfect, even the Darkest Part of the Cosmos, well Equilibrated,

Perfectionist’s Play, played beautifully in The Divine Will, The Sound Current.

 

Somewhere in Grand Universe, tiny mote of Dust suspended in Sunbeam, Revolving,

Bluish-White Planet, covered with Blanket of Cloud’s, The Place called Earth, Evolving,

Thousand’s Civilization’s came, Thousands have Vanished, Still it Roll’s, never Dissolving,

And, you came too, thou shall be Departing, try to be more Loving, Hate need be Fading,

 

The Play Goes on, with all its Twists and Turns, A very Beautiful Poetry written by ONE,

End’s where it had Started, Rhyme’s with the Unrhymed, Having Seen Countless Sun’s.

Just try not to reason with Intellect & listen that Secret Voice, for Mind there is None,

String’s when got Pulled off, nothing stay’s, Same Box goes the King’s and their Pawn’s.

Reviews

[Rye]

This is so good, I enjoyed this write a lot. I found this a work of poetry here. Nicely done

[Mavericks]

Thanks, Ryanna. Glad you enjoyed it!

[Jade]

This is poetry, and so well written and very intriguing. I enjoyed this

[Mavericks]

Thanks again Brandie. Glad you enjoyed it. Will review some of works from your domain...

[Onlyme]

This was poetry to my heart, mind and soul. Let alone eyes and brain. Exceptional beauty held within this tight bundle of heavenly artistry.

[Mavericks]

This is one odd poem i think. Not something i expected from myself. But thanks for the appreciation and ever constructive reviews!

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An excellent ode to our Earth, Life and everything in it.

Life, indeed, is defined by balance. Every action has its opposite reaction and every journey, song, birth, cycle, all that we can surmise, has its own conclusion. Whether we are guided by the "One" or guided by our choices and own destiny is a matter yet to be determined. For in our end we will most definitely have our answers.

A very philosophically musing write. Nicely conceived.

[Mavericks]

You got it, Mate. Yes, life they say is the best Teacher. I myself have gone through a period of Depression, which was actually a call to look inside and ponder on the deeper meanings of life. When you are in the Dark, you are all alone, and i think it's the best time to Introspect. Darkness reigns within us and so the light, as above so below. Embrace everything with an open heart, Light and Dark. Now, that i have embraced the darker side, the fall of Humanness, i can look forward to rise above it, and take a step to our true self which is nothing but light. Change starts with you!

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Well, i hope you overcome your adversary and come out wiser and happier on the other side.

[Amrita]

liked every word of it :) It is beautiful :)

[Mavericks]

Thank you again. Hope you got the essence if it. =)

[Chase Dylan]

*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

An ever-expanding look into the ethereal reaches of space, time, music and gods... But am I a pawn, or a box in a play... Always on repeat... Astoundingly magnifying... A well equilibrated verse...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

this is good.......
nature has balance.......if you are finding an imbalance.......you are not looking close enough.........
great message.....
good job!!!
i really like it!!!
:)

[Mavericks]

You are Spot on my Friend. Yeah, It's all about the Perspective. The Dualism. Everything is already Balanced, we just ought to Resonate and Flow with it. Glad to hear you like it. Life is a Roller Coaster, just Ride it. =)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome......life could also be a ski......and we can just glide........... :D :D

[Mavericks]

Oh Yeah, I hear you! It's just a Song that came up to my Mind. Lol.