Reflection

Reflection

A Poem by Maya
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Searching for who I could have been without depression

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I wish my mirror
showed the woman I could be
Not the girl I am

© 2016 Maya


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Depression just clutches tight out body n mind!!
The remedy to prevent it is calmness...have to produce in the mind...
But when depression makes all go mess...yes you wish to see the desired reflection in the mirror...of a strong being..
Great piece read☺

Posted 1 Year Ago


Reflections in mirror. Just our face. The hidden face and hopeful heart is hidden from view. This is real person. Powerful use of words. Left something for the reader to think about. Thank you Maya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


I wish that people
Accept me as I am rather than
What they want to see...
Sorry couldn't help adding..
This is deep! I liked reading this haiku.. Good job ☺

Posted 2 Years Ago


Short but somehow I fell for it deeply. It maybe just me but i thought it was really deep. These 3 sentences shows the girl you are and I think you are beautiful. Nice work Maya.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maya

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Started writing haiku again after a year long hiatus .
Luna

2 Years Ago

My pleasure :)

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Added on December 11, 2016
Last Updated on December 11, 2016
Tags: Haiku, depression, regret

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A Poem by Maya