Clandestine

Clandestine

A Poem by Mary Ann M.
"

Union of two souls.

"

 

She lays still
Yielding, yearning
Her soft skin
Like Spring
It glows
It calls
It pleads
In a lonely mime


Ivory sheets
Once white
Demanding warmth
Deep longing
Serenading
Like a dry land
Waiting


I watch
I feel
I crave
Savage desire
Pulsating like anger
Like a storm
Like destruction
Insanity

 

I watch
I listen
Her heart commanding
With heat
With passion
Unpararelled
Obsession


She undresses
Reveals
Her soul
I bare
Uncover
Unclothed
Soul
To soul

 

I touch
I roam
Like a traveler
Amazed
Uncovering
Nurturing
I worship


She welcomes
Permitting
She succumbs
Her becoming
She savors
Rippling
Skin
To Skin


I reach
Intruding
Wanting
More
Like hunger
Like pain
Suffocating


She gives
She offers
She opens
Like a slave
To her Queen
Like a Queen
To her Goddess
Heaven


I receive
Tolerating
I devour
Consuming
Mouth
To her being
Maddening


She dithers
She quivers
Like a serpent
She slithers
She takes
Moaning
Damp
Begging


I feast
I swallow
I thrust
I follow
I lick
I suck
I flick
I f**k


We bare
We share
Skin
To skin
Soul
To soul
Body entwined

Like Honeysuckle
Divine

 

© 2016 Mary Ann M.


Author's Note

Mary Ann M.

“What is beautiful is good, and who is good will soon be beautiful.”― Sappho


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Maryanne, this is a perfect poem. The ability to convey feelings that two share with such brevity is a real talent ... and, I for one am jealous. I can't write something like this. In my creative mind I never envision such a creation. There is a wonderful staccato rhythm ... captured often in an unexpected rhyme ....

We bare
We share
Skin
To skin
Soul
To soul
Body entwined
Like Honeysuckle
Divine

Divine, indeed! I believe that the love shared by two is a special thing ... and with two women it often becomes intuitive and verging on spiritual. That is what I feel here ... those are the words and the message you have shared ... Divine!


Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Mary Ann M.

7 Years Ago

Thank you Cilla. Little did you know, your words encouraged me to keep writing.
cilla

7 Years Ago

Maryanne, I am sure there are times you get discouraged as we all do. But never stop believing in yo.. read more
Mary Ann M.

7 Years Ago

Hey Cilla, thank you for getting back at me. And yeah you're right, English is not my first language.. read more



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ron
This was beautiful, erotic, pure pleasure in its most primal state. Thank you I enjoyed it very much.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mary Ann M.

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, ron. Really appreciated.
Nice poem, good rythm and structure. Powerful imagery. very cool

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mary Ann M.

6 Years Ago

Thanks babe!
She gives
She offers
She opens
Like a slave
To her Queen
Like a Queen
To her Goddess
Heaven -- This is my favorite stanza...clever wording and a definite directional feel.

I truly enjoyed the feeling and honesty in this write. Great imagery woven with beautiful language and a picture was created that truly made an impact. The "union of souls" is definitely one of the sweeter sides of life.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mary Ann M.

6 Years Ago

It definitely is:) It serves to relieve the tension of life. I really value your words, Sarah. Thank.. read more
not going to lie that kind of made me hard. but the intimacy is their which is good of course

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mary Ann M.

6 Years Ago

Glad it has such effect on you. Only means it's effective:) Thanks for reading Rees!
:) Good, passionate write Maryanne. I actually found a pleasant rhythm between your lines. Wonderful stuff.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mary Ann M.

6 Years Ago

Thanks Rocan, I actually wrote this way before knowing that poems also have rhythm.
Mary Ann M.

6 Years Ago

Or even before I know anything about rhythm on poetry.
The sweat that falls from the two bodies is assumed in my mind as I read this breath-taking account of two woman entwined. The sensuousness of this poem is enthralling and at the same time titillating. This is one captivating read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mary Ann M.

6 Years Ago

Oh that one? Yeah, it's sexy. It's one of my favorites:)
A.K.A

6 Years Ago

I like the fact that it's erotic and not offensive. But that' just me. :)
Mary Ann M.

6 Years Ago

Right on *_^
This is like the literary version of classy passionate art porn. The picture at the top gets you all worked up and the words that come/cum after (lol) finish you off. Salutes.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mary Ann M.

6 Years Ago

LOL You are wicked! Thank you:)
Commanda Panda

6 Years Ago

Seems to me you like me wicked. :) Just keeping it real.
Dear, this is so HOT, and well spelled, it's a nice thing to enter for a change as a hetro inside of your world, and see how your beautiful thoughts, express here in poetry. I'm in awe of the pure intense beauty of your quill, and the sensitive touch, of it. So passionate.

" She dithers
She quivers
Like a serpent
She slithers
She takes
Moaning
Damp
Begging"

Feeewww, steamy and brilliant! well done dear!
Well done, in total effort, and presentation.

- Elisa




Posted 6 Years Ago


6 Years Ago

*mondaine, I thought in Spanish terms...
Mary Ann M.

6 Years Ago

We always do that. Everything eventually becomes ordinary but we are writers, my friend & we are cap.. read more

6 Years Ago

And I'm happy because of that, that's true sweetie ! :)
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Pax
“HOT” ~ I felt the demanding need & the soul to soul, skin to skin passion. An amazing sight, sigh! The flow of words runs like water, you swim to the burning love, consuming, surrendering & capturing the sweet flow of the passion in that intimate moments.

I truly enjoyed this kabayan, well done! Ikaw na! lol :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pax

6 Years Ago

ka sayo pa kaya. daghan pang time para pang release...lol.. haha
your most welcome :)
Mary Ann M.

6 Years Ago

hahahaha! crazy.....
Pax

6 Years Ago

if crazy is creativity having fun, then I'm up for the challenge ;) LOL
OMG!...what a gem WOMAN!... lovely, lustful, entanglement you've gotten my mind wrapped around... whew!!... yes, I believe you've topped my night! ;D

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mary Ann M.

6 Years Ago

Haha! and the award for the most expressive review goes to you, Robbie :D Thank you for letting me k.. read more

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Added on July 22, 2012
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