head over heels

I'm fallen head over heels 

for a boy to young and already taken.

Oh he plays games with my heart 

And the more i try to stay away,

the closer he pulls me.

she is fallen head over heels 

for the homecoming king. 

She gives him a smile 

but to shy to say a word.

He passes by, 

unaware she evens is alive. 

Reviews

[SwagMaster]

I love the story you've started, but it sounds and looks more like poetry, instead of a story. Also, in head over heals, I think you mean head over heels, and you need to capitalize the word 'i' and put a semi-colon or a period after heart.
Great story