Can't you hear?

Can't you hear?

A Poem by [email protected]

A poem from my past writer's cafe account.


You say that I'm worthless

Not worth you precious time

Obscuring your red hazed vision

Now I'm drawing the line

If I'm such a nusaince

Why is your hand in mine?

If I'm so sorry

Why are you on your knees?

Begging for forgivess?

Oh, Pu-lease!

So now your sorry?

Please, you make me laugh

I can see right through

Your bloodstained mask

I'm slipping off the edge

On the line between anger and rage

Go ahead on your merry way

Your w***e rampage

Worthless behind my back

The world when I'm near

There's nothing you have to say

That i could bear to hear

Get off your knees

Stop cowering in fear

Now its over

Can't you hear?

© 2008 [email protected]

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I like this one hun, considering you only been writing for a year, your writing is great. I like the use of colours as well makes it really stand out well. Thanks for the comment, and thanks for the welcome...


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Nonyabusiness, GA

I love to write, and have been writing for around...only a year, but i still love it. I'm new to all this sharing your writing stuff, and last time i tried to, all my writing got deleted, and i had ab.. more..