A Poem by [email protected]

another poem from my past account. Its kind of short, but it has a big meaning


Night curled around them like a warning siren

Both staring into each other's eyes

getting lost in oblivion

everything she tried to hold on to falls apart

she stood her ground

to have it crumble beneath her

and so she fell

right into the awaiting arms of the one she loves

her sanity is slowly ebbing away

As he leads her from it

Rain falls down heeding a silent warning

Pelting down on the unsuspecting victims

who ignore it

He kneels down, one knee firmly planted on the ground

the only promise of the real world

The jewl sparkles, despite the moonless sky

With a shaky gasp, she falls right next to him

With a muttered word


© 2008 [email protected]

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WOWOWOWOW.. Thats so sweet and has so much meaning. I didn't know what was going to come next but you got me on my toes


Much Lov Anna

Posted 13 Years Ago

Wow, this is really good... It really has alot more meaning than a first glance can take in. I LOVE it!

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on April 12, 2008


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Nonyabusiness, GA

I love to write, and have been writing for around...only a year, but i still love it. I'm new to all this sharing your writing stuff, and last time i tried to, all my writing got deleted, and i had ab.. more..


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