Wide Open

Wide Open

A Poem by Tamika Finley

You left me wide open.
Grasping to breathe your air.
Secretly hating you while seeking your coverage.

Since you said you wouldn't, and still left me bare.


© 2015 Tamika Finley


Author's Note

Tamika Finley
The thought of "wide open" came to me last night but I was too lazy to get out of bed, so I forgot what would have been the original lines.

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A universal dilemma.. nice poem
Terry

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tamika Finley

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
why sometimes love begs for the relief from waiting? I guess it's the wonderful lines for the man who is in love with you.... thanks for sharing!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tamika Finley

5 Years Ago

maybe so. Thanks for reading and reviewing
sh va

5 Years Ago

it's my pleasure!
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B
An unresolved love
can be true torment
and the source of such passion

bravo

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tamika Finley

5 Years Ago

Definitely. thank you so much.

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Tamika Finley
Tamika Finley

Detroit, MI



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I am from Detroit, Michigan but I'll be moving to Florida to start my college experience in the fall. I love to read and write, listen to music, laugh. Sex and the city, Dexter and that 70's show are .. more..

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