Wide Open

You left me wide open.

Grasping to breathe your air.

Secretly hating you while seeking your coverage.

Since you said you wouldn't, and still left me bare.

Author's Note

The thought of "wide open" came to me last night but I was too lazy to get out of bed, so I forgot what would have been the original lines.

Reviews

[Terry O'Leary]

A universal dilemma.. nice poem
Terry

[Tamika Finley]

Thank you so much.

[Deepak Belbase]

why sometimes love begs for the relief from waiting? I guess it's the wonderful lines for the man who is in love with you.... thanks for sharing!

[Tamika Finley]

maybe so. Thanks for reading and reviewing

[Deepak Belbase]

it's my pleasure!

[B]

An unresolved love
can be true torment
and the source of such passion

bravo

[Tamika Finley]

Definitely. thank you so much.