Look Down From A Hilltop

Look Down From A Hilltop

A Poem by Mehul Rwat
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I used to view the scene from this cliff almost everyday but the thought of writing a poem on it came to me when one day after rain I saw this magnificent serene sight till as far as the eye can see.

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When I look down from my school
which lies on top of a hill,
I get filled with peace and charm
as all seems very still.

The corridor behind our class 
is the best place to be,
For it is from here one can view the vast
Terai* plains to as far as one can see.

I like to gaze at the gentle slopes or
the brooks in the valley.
And the stream that escapes the lake
by making a forceful sally.

Far away in the horizon I can see
a mighty river,
And to the other side I see-
hills that go on forever.

The gentle hills are in a zig-zag form-
one partly behind the other,
They are all covered with mighty trees,
ferns and heather.

Sometimes I see little clouds drifting away,
filled up with fun.
And I see black birds flying swiftly
as if straight to the sun!

So if you get a chance to come to our school-
you must be sure you peep,
At this magnificent marvelous sight and
with joy you may weep!

(*terai- foothills.)








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© 2011 Mehul Rwat


Author's Note

Mehul Rwat
I wrote this rather quickly so please don't mind small errors. Thank you.

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It always fascinates when one see out of the window in school. But when it is on a hill top, the scenery is heaven!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow! Beautiful scenes. Cool pen upon this poem of beauty done with a cool lightheartedness!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Its great to be written so fast, i love it! i get a wonderful picture in my mind.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I agree with the other reviews out here. The poem is really written in a very nice style. One review states that Stanza 5 is a bit choppy. I agree with it. You may change it a bit. Rest of the poem is beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Quite well-written for your speed. Some of the rhyming words you place seem a little forced, so maybe flow could be a bit better in stanzas 5 and 7. Also, the way you spelled marvellous is actually marvelous. Other than that, I really liked the imagery you gave, keep up the good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brilliantly sketched the panoramic view of the foothill scene.Always outstanding!Keep the spirit going.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Oh this is so wonderful, I really liked this write,
ever so lovely and dreamy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


So beautiful. I have tears in my eyes and I can just imagine the scene your describing. Beautiful work and do your best! =)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on September 6, 2011
Last Updated on September 7, 2011
Tags: Nature, mountains, cliff, charm, streams, environment.

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Mehul Rwat
Mehul Rwat

Nainital, Kumaon, India



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I am not a professional writer but one that is trying to come up as a good amateur writer who likes all types of writing genres. Writing is my hobby. I like to write specially on nature and it's beaut.. more..

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