Cursed Love

A boys feelings for a girl.

I'm cursed by her
This beautiful killer
She's conquered my mind
And has started killing me from the inside.

When she screams,
My throat aches.
When she cries,
My eyes water.
When she hurts,
My pain is unbearable.

I can't stand
This unmerciful control she has over me.
Does she even realize,
the power she wields?
She's destroying me
Yet in my pain I have fallen for her.

I love her
Her beauty keeps me just inches away from the darkness.
I would surely die for her
But what she really needs
Is me to live for her.

Reviews

[Anicca]

A wonderful poem. 'I would surely die for her, but what she really needs, is me to live for her', this speaks millions in just a few small words. It sounds what you have is worth holding on to. The second stanza also confirms this, love like this is rare. Thanks for sharing and allowing me to reminise.

[Sabbath_Nikole]

mmmm, i love this piece. Love that last line, it's quiet but fantastic. An interesting paradox you pose with pain and love, complete opposites but usually there always inextricably intertwined. Beautiful.

[Kristen]

I loved the flow and structure of this poem, excellent write!

- S.T.

[Bryanna - QueenStephni]

Beautiful imagy. i thoroughly enjoyed it

[mystic soul]

wonderful poem.. you have so beautifully expressed the feelings of a boy for his love... I just couldn't stop reading it again and again.. A very beautiful and captivating poem... thanks for sharing it...

[*Evelen*]

This is an amazing poem. Wow! To explain what it is like to being in love where the other ones happiness essential for your own happiness. Well done =)

[Ardeth Lane]

Beatiful. Very good.

[Luna]

that is very adorable. it flows amazingly and you can just sense the love this boy feels for the girl. she is one lucky gal. great work.