Body Art

Body Art

A Poem by G. Writing
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Many struggle to express themselves so we use other terms to describe our main reason I used a paint brush to describe a sharp object and paint as blood. I wrote this because it described how I felt.

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Scars are memories
you choose to remember.
Your body is a canvass
You are in control,
With what the colors you choose 
Which ways you chose to lead the brush.
You create these unique patterns
Only you know how they were created.
To yourself your expressing your own emotion,
To others they stare as if your body is telling them your needy.
As if your body is just a statue filled with emptiness
Longing for their undivided attention.
To others it's easy to watch you create the art,
But to yourself you become numb.
Nobody is strong enough to take the brush,
Instead they're weak
So they watch you add more paint to the brush,
To paint another recent memory.

© 2018 G. Writing


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G. Writing
Please help me better my writing ;)

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I feel that this came naturally to you. You did a fantastic job!! from the visuals to just expressing emotions just loved the in- depth analysis you described here. Swell job!
when asked for help we become better writers over time..with practice and I find the best writing is done from the heart♥Like this piece of work♥maria


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

G. Writing

6 Years Ago

thank you so much I am so glad you loved it :)
maria  ( rose)

6 Years Ago

you're welcome! :)



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That poem is so beautiful , its a wonderful way to describe how tender the Body is

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

G. Writing

5 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you liked it :)
I feel that this came naturally to you. You did a fantastic job!! from the visuals to just expressing emotions just loved the in- depth analysis you described here. Swell job!
when asked for help we become better writers over time..with practice and I find the best writing is done from the heart♥Like this piece of work♥maria


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

G. Writing

6 Years Ago

thank you so much I am so glad you loved it :)
maria  ( rose)

6 Years Ago

you're welcome! :)

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