A Poem by G. Writing

People always need that one person to feel safe but once that one person leaves were no longer the same person after

I long for the love I can't receive
this world is slowly changing me.
I long for the same attention
those who don't deserve it receive. 
To feel that security 
Everyone wishes for.
There's only so much I can show
without having the feeling of being judged.
It's killing me that you're not here,
You won't believe the wonders I can see.
How I'm living happily
but having this shameful feeling of being guilty.
I search for help as my faith slips away,
as each memory I have of us
slowly fades from my mind.
You become this ghost 
I can no longer feel
All this love I had 
just disappears
You caused me misery
cant you see
I'm drowning. 

© 2018 G. Writing

Author's Note

G. Writing
Mind full of thoughts...This just came to my mind randomly.. Enjoy :)

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I know the feeling all to well. This one really hit home. You said it all perfect. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 2 Years Ago

G. Writing

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!
Sometimes randomness is fantastic. This is powerful and packs a good punch with every line. You have a few grammatical errors ("....that YOU'RE not here"; ".....believe the WONDERS I can see"; "......I seek the help" (no "for" - "search for" but "seek" no "of). But other than that, brava! Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Added on July 22, 2017
Last Updated on July 2, 2018
Tags: sadness, incomplete, misery


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