As Alice

As Alice

A Poem by Melobldnfr
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As Alice

12/09/10

 

I once fell out of time
In a space I thought was mine
With your hands in my hair.
There was not time
For fear to enter the mind,
You just took me there.
In an instant
I was bent,
My back an archer's bow
As you snuck in -
Somewhere between my skin
And my armor of existence.

 

 

© 2011 Melobldnfr


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Nice meeting you Alice.. Ah, the name was not Alice, I remember you say that. In fact the name was never mentioned. In just twelve short lines you have expressed a whole world of emotion. Somewhere between my skin- this is intense, daym! It made the hair on the back of my neck stand up. It is amazing how one person can knock us on our feet. In just a heartbeat, we find ourselves in the edge of reason. I know how it feels, I am always there, dang it:)

This piece is simply amazing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Ann M.

8 Years Ago

I don't know how it is I felt that you would - haha! oh you knew for sure and I think I'm not in li.. read more
Mary Ann M.

8 Years Ago

amazing how one person can knock us off our feet***
Melobldnfr

8 Years Ago

:-}



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Nice meeting you Alice.. Ah, the name was not Alice, I remember you say that. In fact the name was never mentioned. In just twelve short lines you have expressed a whole world of emotion. Somewhere between my skin- this is intense, daym! It made the hair on the back of my neck stand up. It is amazing how one person can knock us on our feet. In just a heartbeat, we find ourselves in the edge of reason. I know how it feels, I am always there, dang it:)

This piece is simply amazing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Ann M.

8 Years Ago

I don't know how it is I felt that you would - haha! oh you knew for sure and I think I'm not in li.. read more
Mary Ann M.

8 Years Ago

amazing how one person can knock us off our feet***
Melobldnfr

8 Years Ago

:-}

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Tags: new age, contemporary, reflection, retrospection, self, love, introspection, dreams, romance, relationships

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Melobldnfr

Wichita, KS



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