Give and Take

Give and Take

A Poem by Melobldnfr
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Poem

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Give and Take

09/12/10

 

So much tissue on the floor

Used up like broken glass

And scattered. I want more,

Know that we are more than that.

 

I reach to touch you,

I don't want to have to ask

Or feel ashamed. You let me touch you;

Please, let's pull away our masks.

 

It's more than my lips that say your name,

And it's all said from a place of true love, Baby.

You touch me and I know you feel the same,

And I hear you, as I've missed you.

 

You are so beautiful,

Please melt into me.

I need to feel you give

As you take from me,

 

And give me your love, as I give you my love...

 

 

© 2011 Melobldnfr


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Angst is a word that has become overused but this certainly fits the definition in a very good way ... "Please melt into me ... I need to feel you give" Lines like this are just bare the soul and hope there is some response ... anything. You have a collection of these short poems and I can find memorable phrases in all of them. Pages from the heart are what they are ... thank you for sharing.


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Angst is a word that has become overused but this certainly fits the definition in a very good way ... "Please melt into me ... I need to feel you give" Lines like this are just bare the soul and hope there is some response ... anything. You have a collection of these short poems and I can find memorable phrases in all of them. Pages from the heart are what they are ... thank you for sharing.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Melobldnfr
Melobldnfr

Wichita, KS



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