Transcendence

Transcendence

A Poem by Melobldnfr
"

I will rise above this.

"
06/21/12
 
I want to walk bare foot
Until my soul bleeds...
I thought you coming to see me
Was about me.
I didn't realize it was about you
Running away, unable to sit still
Long enough to face your inner reflections
Or make more than constitutions
Regarding your supposed understandings
And resolutions.
I'm off now to eat beans again,
But I will rise above this
Bravely and with dignity.

© 2013 Melobldnfr


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Melobldnfr
Art by wildpianist.

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Rejection? Maybe.. Coming to an end is not uncommon to us all or at least it is as accepted as coming of age. It is painful. It could kill. But the effect depends on our intent upon the situation.

It would have been better if courage was like our biceps. Work hard at it and voila! You have a good body! Sadly, it's not as easy to acquire. Instead, it is something that a person develops over a period of time. There is something beautiful about it though- hope. Hope for anything good out of everything gloomy. And I think this is what you were trying to deliver and I like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melobldnfr

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Maryanne. Yes, the ultimate rejection: someone being so selfish as to know whe.. read more



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Rejection? Maybe.. Coming to an end is not uncommon to us all or at least it is as accepted as coming of age. It is painful. It could kill. But the effect depends on our intent upon the situation.

It would have been better if courage was like our biceps. Work hard at it and voila! You have a good body! Sadly, it's not as easy to acquire. Instead, it is something that a person develops over a period of time. There is something beautiful about it though- hope. Hope for anything good out of everything gloomy. And I think this is what you were trying to deliver and I like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melobldnfr

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Maryanne. Yes, the ultimate rejection: someone being so selfish as to know whe.. read more
"I'm off now to eat beans again,
But I will rise above this"

I guess that's one way to deal with rejection...a Southern way in the style of Flannery O'Connor

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melobldnfr

11 Years Ago

What can I say? I get tired of eating crow. Lol. And "eating crow" would insinuate a wrong doing .. read more
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Good stuff!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on June 22, 2012
Last Updated on August 7, 2013
Tags: new age, contemporary, reflection, retrospection, self, love, introspection, dreams, romance, relationships, life, struggle, imagery

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Melobldnfr
Melobldnfr

Wichita, KS



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