Through A Bus Window

Through A Bus Window

A Poem by Melody
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The sun and rain, but
for some people,
the moon and the snow

Children at play and school zones, but
for some people,
chasing dreams and escaping life.

Nature's prayers and smiles, but
for some people,
man-made pessimists and frowns.

School bus windows, but
for some people,
only way to get around.

Racing home, but
for some people,
running from Hell and everything else.

© 2014 Melody


Author's Note

Melody
Inspired by the school bus window after PALS.

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A very interesting piece tbh, vivid in the simplicity of an everyday moment. Good work

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melody

9 Years Ago

Thanks Sam! :)
Really good. I was really impressed by the character you expressed and the way your piece flowed. I fell in love with the way you expressed the real characteristics of this world and the way the world works. How we forget to notice the little things. And, if we connect all of it together, it makes some sort of sense. It was really good. Thank you for blessing me with this way of thinking.

-Casey

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melody

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Casey Nicolee

9 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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