Adventure

Adventure

A Poem by Meraki

I explored 
The most abominable 
Corner of my soul, today 
We danced and played 
In their candid dark delight

© 2014 Meraki


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Hahaha! Ok, this was enjoyable. I feel like I can relate to this because often times, I like to go to that dark place inside me and just mess around. Summon the demons and play, if you will.

Very clever and very enjoyable. I saw myself in that corner, and now, I'm thinking I may have to visit again soon. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meraki

9 Years Ago

That corner is like a deep fried twinkie for me, delicious and only allowed once a year. I'm glad yo.. read more



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This was a very interesting poem my friend.Every one has to face and accept their darkness sometime.So why not dance and play with it on occasion lol.I really liked this and you penned it so well :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meraki

9 Years Ago

Yes let's all have fun on the dark side every once in a while, we will laugh and laugh and tell of o.. read more
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome :)
Ok, sorry, I think this was supposed to be like serious and all ... but I just keep seeing Daffy Duck and the Abominable Snow Creature. "I will take you to my cave and I will squeeze you and hug you and play with you and ... " =:p {snort, snort...}

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Meraki

9 Years Ago

Perfect! Hahaha thank you so much for that. Made me laugh
Hahaha! Ok, this was enjoyable. I feel like I can relate to this because often times, I like to go to that dark place inside me and just mess around. Summon the demons and play, if you will.

Very clever and very enjoyable. I saw myself in that corner, and now, I'm thinking I may have to visit again soon. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meraki

9 Years Ago

That corner is like a deep fried twinkie for me, delicious and only allowed once a year. I'm glad yo.. read more

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Added on June 2, 2014
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Tags: soul, explaining, adventure, corner, dark

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Meraki

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