As The Stars Do

As The Stars Do

A Poem by Rose

She watched as twilight
Faded into midnight
gleaming with the eyes and souls of the universe
and dancing with the knowledge that they would appear another day.
But as for us?
We can not guarentee this.
So we must enjoy every waking moment
as the stars do.

© 2020 Rose


Author's Note

Rose
I hope you enjoyed this! Have a wonderful day- as the stars do!

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This started out as a very beautiful poem, and then hit you in the face with a lesson we ALL forget and you gave us a great reminder! Don’t get me wrong, the entire poem was beautiful, but I love it when poems teach us something too! And you wrote it wonderfully

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rose

3 Years Ago

Thank you oh so very much! ❤️
Vertigo Cat1111

3 Years Ago

My pleasure! :)
The speaker here seems in the first lines to be speaking of someone who transitioned out of this life and now awaits reincarnation. The last lines seem to advise the rest of us to make hay while the sun yet shines. Not bad advice, actually.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rose

3 Years Ago

Ah! I do like that it tells a story! Thank you very much !❤️
Time is fleeting
so important to
make each moment
count .time being
an illusive thing
we're all going to fade
into that midnight mist
some twilight day

nice work

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rose

3 Years Ago

That was lovely! Thank you so much!❤️
  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

you're s o welcome

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Added on September 30, 2020
Last Updated on September 30, 2020
Tags: Stars, Midnight, universe, life

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