This should be the anthem for today's online world. People don't reach out much, & when they do, it's a one-liner. Your poem gets inside the head of this trend -- tangled in our doubts & uncertainty, we all become more & more isolated. Maybe this other person thinks I'm a jerk, so I won't reach out -- while the other person is thinking something similar, & it stops them from reaching out, too. This is realistic & believable (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Caged feelings such a philosophical and existentialist way of investigation of the meaning being. In the line
"I didn't spill my heart
out onto this page
because my feelings built me a cage." Shows powerful conflicting emotion yet conflicted which is important for me that's when you have all these ideas cause being lost is the best place to be pushes you to grow and truly find oneself. I know you had different meanings intended but love the flow enjoyable read. sincerely your friend in poetry and life
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
Thank you SO very much! It means the world! I hope you have a day as amazing as you are! ❤️
XDD Thank you so much!❤️ And actually, I have seen the book in my local library before, but I ne.. read moreXDD Thank you so much!❤️ And actually, I have seen the book in my local library before, but I never read it. Is it good?
3 Years Ago
yes, the author composed a bunch of love letters from strangers of things they wished they said to l.. read moreyes, the author composed a bunch of love letters from strangers of things they wished they said to loved ones, letters of heartbreak, and letters of how love changed their life.
3 Years Ago
Woah. okay that is definitely amazing! I am going to read it now! Much appreciated!❤️
This hit very, very hard, and is so honest. The guilt, the longing, the bitterness that you didn't get everything out- ugh, it was too real. I'm trying my hardest to say what I want now, though! It's still a struggle, but when your mind refuses to let you get it out, it's a nightmare. Thank you for writing such a relatable poem, I think my new favorite of yours!
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
THANK YOUUU SO MUCH!! Much love to youuu! Have a day as amazing as youuu! ❤️❤️❤️
I have a creative mind and tons of ideas I would love to share! Please bear with me, as my grammar may not be all that good. I am still learning after all!
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