I Want It All With You

I Want It All With You

A Poem by Isabel

Sun peaking through the green folds over our heads.
I laugh along to the thought of my death.
Purple diffused amongst souls amused
And I find it funny how we all pretend,
Like living dreams are out of fire and everything is perfect,
But I'd be better off wild and free from my head.

I want it all with you.
Filling our hearts to the brim with anything if we choose.
I want it all with you.

Satin sheets tangled around our legs and
You really think that love has no end.
Dark blue skies reflect in your eyes
And I knew that it meant
This was all that mattered, the summer nights we spent
Forgetting about troubles even if it was just for a second.

I want it all with you.
Filling our hearts to the brim with anything if we choose.
I want it all with you.

I wouldn't mind being doped up on the pretty things life tempts us with
And forgetting about the darkness behind it.
I wouldn't mind being drugged by dreams while my own thieves wait and scheme
And catch me when I'm floating.

I wouldn't mind because I want it all with you.

© 2015 Isabel


Author's Note

Isabel
I've been caught up lately.

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This poem has harvested my heart, for I can relate so well with your poem. We humans like to live in an illusion, the safety bubble of life but sometimes, you need to pop this bubble in order to be free. When you are free and your mind is not bounded, love will feel so much more real.

Good job :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Isabel

5 Years Ago

Great insights thanks for your review!



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really liked the line you ended this with. Loved the feel and the overall flow of the piece. Really elegant writing with out seeming old and outdated.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

how sweet! poems about love and romance are my favorite so far and this one is a prime example of how they should look/feel/sound like.. it felt nice and mellow too as though this poem was formed whilst sleeping..

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Isabel

5 Years Ago

Haha it definitely took some time writing, although some parts did come to me on a natural whim. read more
This poem has harvested my heart, for I can relate so well with your poem. We humans like to live in an illusion, the safety bubble of life but sometimes, you need to pop this bubble in order to be free. When you are free and your mind is not bounded, love will feel so much more real.

Good job :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Isabel

5 Years Ago

Great insights thanks for your review!
My my my! Every verse so intense!
Great piece Maria!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Isabel

5 Years Ago

Thank you Kunda!
Maria M: Love it; flow is very good, great rhythm, I Want It All With You...feeled with passion; it was as if the world was meant for two, you continually reinforced that message throughout each line; nothing else mattered, just love; that feeling, those moments together; time is fleeting, live in the moment. Thank you. Dale

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Isabel

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I appreciate your review 😊
Confuser

6 Years Ago

My pleasure!
I really like the natural flow to it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Isabel

6 Years Ago

Haha thank you Aeon!
I have a question or two if you don't mind my asking. In the second line did you mean to say "I laugh alone"? I'm not sure what you mean by this phrase "Like living dreams are out of fire" can you explain what it for me? This should be an interesting song lyrics, that is how you intend to use this as song lyrics?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Isabel

6 Years Ago

I don't mind at all! For your first question, I do mean "along". As for your second question, with m.. read more
Bear

6 Years Ago

Yes that did answer my questions and thank you for the explanation, I now see where I misinterpreted.. read more
"I find it funny how we all pretend,
Like living dreams are out of fire and
everything is perfect,
But I'd be better off wild and free from my
head" great poem love the flow and every verse ,,amazing work

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Isabel

6 Years Ago

Thanks, I do what I can 😁

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